Not bad at all
Favorite song from the movie, been looking for a version of this, glad I found yours. Could be less repetitive and more forceful, but it's definitely worth the listen and DL.
As for suggestions, try to be a little less repetitive in your future songs, you have good melodies but it's all the same throughout. For this song, I'd recommend ad-libbing the main melody a bit instead of just changing the bass line. Also, even though the original is soft and slow-ish, make it a bit more your own, make it a bit faster and more forceful, I've been thinking about remixing this myself. Then again, it's your song, and this is what you had in mind, I'm just saying what I would've done.
It may sound like I don't like it, but it's actually really good. I'm just trying to offer suggestions, you're a lot better than me.